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MirandaJ

Page history last edited by Miranda J 5 years, 3 months ago

Keep going

ignore the

struggle

that the world

faces you with

when you are

down on your knees

at your

worst

Don’t give up

stay strong

Don’t let them take you

down

Show them

you’re more than that

Show them you

won’t give up

Don’t let them think they are

better than you

Show them

that they can’t take you

down

That they

won’t take you down

Make them understand

that you are

The leader of yourself

Not them

When you are

down on your knees

keep your head held high

 

Comments (15)

Brinna E. said

at 1:07 pm on Dec 18, 2014

Good job, I like how you could see a picture of the poem.

Chloe Gr said

at 1:07 pm on Dec 18, 2014

I like your poem because it's encouraging.

Weller C said

at 1:15 pm on Dec 18, 2014

You convey a great message, great job, I enjoyed reading it!

Taylor N said

at 1:21 pm on Dec 18, 2014

This is a very encouraging poem! Great job!

Moises C. said

at 1:21 pm on Dec 18, 2014

I like how it's about not letting anyone else control you like a puppet that you should just keep fighting no matter what.

Chloe Ga said

at 1:22 pm on Dec 18, 2014

I love how encouraging you poem is!

Hannah V said

at 1:24 pm on Dec 18, 2014

i agree; no giving up!

Gina G said

at 1:31 pm on Dec 18, 2014

I like your poem, I really like how you made it such a encouraging poem.

Ezra S said

at 1:38 pm on Dec 18, 2014

I like how you made the poem very encouraging.

Ian M. said

at 1:44 pm on Dec 18, 2014

Great choice of words. Nice Job.

Sam W said

at 2:00 pm on Dec 18, 2014

I like how you are trying to stay positive. Good job.

Brennan I said

at 3:04 pm on Dec 18, 2014

Very visible to see in your head.

Sage M said

at 10:20 am on Dec 19, 2014

Good job! I like how inspirational it is.

Rebecca F. said

at 1:30 pm on Dec 19, 2014

I like this a lot because it is very encouraging and different.

Dylan F said

at 1:37 pm on Dec 19, 2014

The poem is very descriptive

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