Keep going
ignore the
struggle
that the world
faces you with
when you are
down on your knees
at your
worst
Don’t give up
stay strong
Don’t let them take you
down
Show them
you’re more than that
Show them you
won’t give up
Don’t let them think they are
better than you
Show them
that they can’t take you
down
That they
won’t take you down
Make them understand
that you are
The leader of yourself
Not them
When you are
down on your knees
keep your head held high
Comments (15)
Brinna E. said
at 1:07 pm on Dec 18, 2014
Good job, I like how you could see a picture of the poem.
Chloe Gr said
at 1:07 pm on Dec 18, 2014
I like your poem because it's encouraging.
Weller C said
at 1:15 pm on Dec 18, 2014
You convey a great message, great job, I enjoyed reading it!
Taylor N said
at 1:21 pm on Dec 18, 2014
This is a very encouraging poem! Great job!
Moises C. said
at 1:21 pm on Dec 18, 2014
I like how it's about not letting anyone else control you like a puppet that you should just keep fighting no matter what.
Chloe Ga said
at 1:22 pm on Dec 18, 2014
I love how encouraging you poem is!
Hannah V said
at 1:24 pm on Dec 18, 2014
i agree; no giving up!
Gina G said
at 1:31 pm on Dec 18, 2014
I like your poem, I really like how you made it such a encouraging poem.
Ezra S said
at 1:38 pm on Dec 18, 2014
I like how you made the poem very encouraging.
Ian M. said
at 1:44 pm on Dec 18, 2014
Great choice of words. Nice Job.
Sam W said
at 2:00 pm on Dec 18, 2014
I like how you are trying to stay positive. Good job.
Brennan I said
at 3:04 pm on Dec 18, 2014
Very visible to see in your head.
Sage M said
at 10:20 am on Dec 19, 2014
Good job! I like how inspirational it is.
Rebecca F. said
at 1:30 pm on Dec 19, 2014
I like this a lot because it is very encouraging and different.
Dylan F said
at 1:37 pm on Dec 19, 2014
The poem is very descriptive
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