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MorganneM

Page history last edited by Morganne M 5 years, 5 months ago

Christmas is Mia’s favorite holiday. She loves the idea of Christmas, and all the things you do over the season. This year she’s spending Christmas in California with her Mom. She had just gotten a new job, so they had moved over the summer. So far she was liking California. Until she realized Christmas would be different.

She realized there would be no snow where she was. One of her favorite things was snow. She loved to go outside with her friends and build snowmen and other things. Another thing was friends. She had made a few friends at her new school, but the ones she had in Missouri were better friends. She’s known them her whole life. This Christmas wasn’t going to be as exciting as she thought.

It was 5 days until Christmas and Christmas break was starting tomorrow so Mia had one day left of school. But, her mom had picked her up early because she had a “Surprise” for Mia. She wouldn’t tell her what it was, but she noticed suitcases in the trunk. Mia was very curious as to what the surprise was.

They had driven out of their new town, and were headed towards the airport. Mia didn’t understand what was going on. Then it clicked. The suitcases in the back, Almost Christmas, going towards the airport, they were going home! Mia was beyond excited. She asked her mom if that was the surprise, and she responded with a yes.

When they got off the plane in Missouri, her friends and her dad were waiting for them outside. This made Mia extra happy because she got to spend her Christmas not only with her mom and dad, but with her best friends too.

 

Comments (17)

Julie M said

at 1:12 pm on Dec 18, 2014

I liked the part when she found out she was going home. Good job!!!

Weller C said

at 1:23 pm on Dec 18, 2014

Interesting choice of a topic, this and interesting story.

Moises C. said

at 1:26 pm on Dec 18, 2014

It has a great plot twist that Mia thinks she won't have snow do to the place she is in and then all of a sudden they go home and everyones happy.

Taylor N said

at 1:26 pm on Dec 18, 2014

I liked how your topic was on Christmas! I love your writing. Great job Morganne!

Chloe Gr said

at 1:29 pm on Dec 18, 2014

The ending is so surprising! Good job!!

Hannah V said

at 1:29 pm on Dec 18, 2014

i like how you dont just say, KNOW SHE REMEMBERS! i like how you say it in fun words like THEN IT CLICKED

Brinna E. said

at 1:31 pm on Dec 18, 2014

Good job, I like how you used quotes.

Chloe Ga said

at 1:32 pm on Dec 18, 2014

I love the ending!! Good job!

Miranda J said

at 1:39 pm on Dec 18, 2014

Cool plot twist at the end there! Great Job!

Gina G said

at 1:46 pm on Dec 18, 2014

I like how her emotions were sad in the beginning then turned out really happy in the ending. Good job!!

Ezra S said

at 1:48 pm on Dec 18, 2014

I like how California wasn't something she had expected.

Rebecca F. said

at 1:55 pm on Dec 18, 2014

Great job! I like how she got to see her friends and Dad for Christmas. It wouldn't be the same without snow!

Ian M. said

at 1:58 pm on Dec 18, 2014

Good Job. Like the twist ending. Interesting how she was moping and feeling down, then she goes home and everybody's ends up being happy in the end. Good Job.

Sam W said

at 7:42 pm on Dec 18, 2014

I liked when she got to go home to her friends good job

Emily S said

at 9:28 am on Dec 19, 2014

I can relate to this... Good job with the details and the big surprise. Nice job

Morganne M said

at 1:37 pm on Dec 19, 2014

I know I kinda related this to you.

Dylan F said

at 1:46 pm on Dec 19, 2014

i like that it is a happy ever after

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