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NatashaG

Page history last edited by Natasha G. 5 years, 6 months ago

When your down or up times:

When I fall its hard to

Get

Back

Up

Getting up

In the morning

Losing a game

On a rainy day

Staying up late at night

When I think that people are

Making fun of me

I feel

Bitter

Gloomy

Hurting

When I light up the sky

I think that people have it

Worse than I do

I think when we win a game

Greatful

Cheerful

I think when

I relax on the couch

Bed

Chair

When I laugh

When I feel like I am

Welcome

Delighted

Joyful

Glad

To be with my family

I think when

I help out

Helpful

Kind

 

Comments (15)

Pauline C said

at 9:04 am on Dec 18, 2014

I like how smoothly your poem goes along

Joey S. said

at 9:11 am on Dec 18, 2014

I like how if you read this after a bad day it could make your day great.

Emily S said

at 9:20 am on Dec 18, 2014

I like how you put in all of the obstacles in the story, but then you turn the story around and make it a good day:)

Emma P said

at 9:22 am on Dec 18, 2014

Good way of getting back up during the hard times.

Levi L. said

at 9:33 am on Dec 18, 2014

I like how you are saying never to give up.

Jocelyn K said

at 9:36 am on Dec 18, 2014

I like how you wrote about never giving up.

Megan K said

at 10:24 am on Dec 18, 2014

I like how you wrote to never give up on yourself1

Austin M. said

at 12:20 pm on Dec 18, 2014

I like how you explained the plot.

Trenten M said

at 8:36 am on Dec 19, 2014

I like how you made it into a poem

BrianneR said

at 9:10 am on Dec 19, 2014

It's really good poem, and it would be great for people who are having a bad day

Lexi R said

at 9:27 am on Dec 19, 2014

I liked the detail that you included

Tracy H said

at 9:45 am on Dec 19, 2014

I like how you included the happy things and bad things.

Brennan I said

at 1:49 pm on Dec 19, 2014

I liked how it sounded like it had happened before.

Ezra S said

at 1:57 pm on Dec 19, 2014

I like how your explaining the good and the bad in your poem.

Kaylin K-T said

at 2:04 pm on Dec 19, 2014

I like how you explained the bad things and the good things. Good job!

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