I like how your poem flows so smoothly.

I like that you put animals into the poem, it made it seem more realistic.

I like how you worded things

I like how you you know how the character feels.

I like how you put animals into the story and said what it would feel like.

Good way fo showing how you were breathing heavily.

I like how there were those details that you could imgine

Its shows how you try as hard as you can but you can't get there.

I like how this poem would help someone get thrue a hard time

I like how you have animals in your poem!

I like how you explain the animals perspective to yours.

I like how you made it into a poem

It is a great poem, and it helps people if they were having a bad day.

I like how you expressed how the person is feeling.

like how you explained the tiger's point of view too.

It's very interesting how you say the ones who hurt just walk by you would think they would be cruel or mean or something.