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CaseyP

Page history last edited by Casey P 5 years, 11 months ago

 

 

Cold

 

Cold cookie,

 

Icy Vanilla in my throat,

 

Soft ice cream,


From Dairy Queen,

 

Chill on my teeth,

 

Fumes of the car,

 

Bumps on the roads,

 

Delicious,

 

Yet so cold,

 

Like Ice,

 

As cold as snow,

 

It's taste is better than the chill of snow,

 

I taste the cookie dough,

 

Soft and mixed with vanilla,

 

So bold,

 

The flavor is the flavor of summer,

 

It is new,

 

but also old,

 

The summer is hot,

 

And the ice cream is cold.

 

 

Comments (14)

Anna T said

at 12:15 pm on May 8, 2014

I liked your details about the ice cream and how the summer was hot.

Sierra G. said

at 12:16 pm on May 8, 2014

I liked that you described the coldness.

NathanC said

at 12:30 pm on May 8, 2014

Great story you had awesome details and descriptions.

Dillon L said

at 12:34 pm on May 8, 2014

Great details i like how described it as the tast of summer

Kassi S. said

at 12:35 pm on May 8, 2014

It made me feel like I was there watching you eat your ice cream.

Kariann E said

at 12:35 pm on May 8, 2014

I like how you used greats descriptions and details to describe what the ice cream tasted like

Taylor O said

at 12:39 pm on May 8, 2014

I can taste the ice cream and the coldness of it going down my throat good details!

Claire H. said

at 12:39 pm on May 8, 2014

I liked the descriptions and how you set your poem up.

Macy H said

at 12:41 pm on May 8, 2014

This poem has great details and I can almost taste the ice cream in my mouth.

Allison L. said

at 12:42 pm on May 8, 2014

I liked how you wrote your poem and the details you used.

Hailey S said

at 12:42 pm on May 8, 2014

I like the details you used and you told about how hot or cold it was

Zach F said

at 12:43 pm on May 8, 2014

This poem had great detail and I like the summer is hot and the ice cream is cold, nice

Megan B said

at 12:45 pm on May 8, 2014

I like how you described eating the ice cream, very good!

Joe B. said

at 12:46 pm on May 8, 2014

made me want to eat ice cream right now!

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