Cold
Cold cookie,
Icy Vanilla in my throat,
Soft ice cream,
From Dairy Queen,
Chill on my teeth,
Fumes of the car,
Bumps on the roads,
Delicious,
Yet so cold,
Like Ice,
As cold as snow,
It's taste is better than the chill of snow,
I taste the cookie dough,
Soft and mixed with vanilla,
So bold,
The flavor is the flavor of summer,
It is new,
but also old,
The summer is hot,
And the ice cream is cold.
Comments (14)
Anna T said
at 12:15 pm on May 8, 2014
I liked your details about the ice cream and how the summer was hot.
Sierra G. said
at 12:16 pm on May 8, 2014
I liked that you described the coldness.
NathanC said
at 12:30 pm on May 8, 2014
Great story you had awesome details and descriptions.
Dillon L said
at 12:34 pm on May 8, 2014
Great details i like how described it as the tast of summer
Kassi S. said
at 12:35 pm on May 8, 2014
It made me feel like I was there watching you eat your ice cream.
Kariann E said
at 12:35 pm on May 8, 2014
I like how you used greats descriptions and details to describe what the ice cream tasted like
Taylor O said
at 12:39 pm on May 8, 2014
I can taste the ice cream and the coldness of it going down my throat good details!
Claire H. said
at 12:39 pm on May 8, 2014
I liked the descriptions and how you set your poem up.
Macy H said
at 12:41 pm on May 8, 2014
This poem has great details and I can almost taste the ice cream in my mouth.
Allison L. said
at 12:42 pm on May 8, 2014
I liked how you wrote your poem and the details you used.
Hailey S said
at 12:42 pm on May 8, 2014
I like the details you used and you told about how hot or cold it was
Zach F said
at 12:43 pm on May 8, 2014
This poem had great detail and I like the summer is hot and the ice cream is cold, nice
Megan B said
at 12:45 pm on May 8, 2014
I like how you described eating the ice cream, very good!
Joe B. said
at 12:46 pm on May 8, 2014
made me want to eat ice cream right now!
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