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JennaB

Page history last edited by Jenna B. 6 years, 2 months ago

Getting my puppies for the first time

 

You could still smell the sausage

That we at for breakfast.

While we were walking,

out of the house and

onto the snowy porch

we were surprised with a

man dressed up as santa

standing by the door.

He was carrying two big boxes.

We went back

inside with him and he

put one box in front of me

and the another in front of my brother.

when we each opened our own

box and in each box was a

 black cocker spanial puppy.

 

Comments (18)

Casey P said

at 12:20 pm on May 8, 2014

Nice details on the type of dogs

NathanC said

at 12:21 pm on May 8, 2014

I liked how you siad all the dogs names

Taylor O said

at 12:23 pm on May 8, 2014

I can smell the sausage and see the guy dressed up as santa nice details

Dillon L said

at 12:23 pm on May 8, 2014

I like how you described how you could still smell the sausages and the sight of the box and the man dressed as santa

Kariann E said

at 12:23 pm on May 8, 2014

I like how you described what happened

Kassi S. said

at 12:24 pm on May 8, 2014

I liked how you used details of the food you hd just eaten and then the surprise of the dogs.

Brandon B said

at 12:24 pm on May 8, 2014

Great details, I could visualize the whole story.

Macy H said

at 12:25 pm on May 8, 2014

I like how I could see "Santa" at the door.

Allison L. said

at 12:26 pm on May 8, 2014

I love the details you used!!

Hailey S said

at 12:26 pm on May 8, 2014

I like the details you used and someone dressed as Santa come to your door.

Claire H. said

at 12:26 pm on May 8, 2014

I like how you described the dogs of what breed they were.

Jaylee H. said

at 12:27 pm on May 8, 2014

I liked how you described the man dressed as santa.

Sierra G. said

at 12:27 pm on May 8, 2014

I liked how you described who gave you the puppies.

Lauren E said

at 12:27 pm on May 8, 2014

I like how I can picture this happening!

Megan B said

at 12:28 pm on May 8, 2014

I like how you described the day and what happened.

Joe B. said

at 12:31 pm on May 8, 2014

good use of santa

Anna T said

at 12:31 pm on May 8, 2014

I like how you describe its snowy, and how he was dressed up like santa.

Jacob E said

at 12:35 pm on May 8, 2014

I can see Santa putting the boxes in front of you and your brother.

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