Nice details on the type of dogs

I liked how you siad all the dogs names

I can smell the sausage and see the guy dressed up as santa nice details

I like how you described how you could still smell the sausages and the sight of the box and the man dressed as santa

I like how you described what happened

I liked how you used details of the food you hd just eaten and then the surprise of the dogs.

Great details, I could visualize the whole story.

I like how I could see "Santa" at the door.

I love the details you used!!

I like the details you used and someone dressed as Santa come to your door.

I like how you described the dogs of what breed they were.

I liked how you described the man dressed as santa.

I liked how you described who gave you the puppies.

I like how I can picture this happening!

I like how you described the day and what happened.

good use of santa

I like how you describe its snowy, and how he was dressed up like santa.

I can see Santa putting the boxes in front of you and your brother.