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AllieW

Page history last edited by Allie W 5 years, 11 months ago

Into the Saddle

 

I stick my foot

into the stirrup,

swing

my other leg up,

and I’m

in the saddle.

I gather up

the reins

and off we go!

I look between

the horse’s

dark brown ears

in front of me.

The movement

of the horse

beneath me

and the power

I know she contains.

I cling to her neck

knowing that

if I don’t,

I won’t stay

in the saddle.

Her hair is rough,

but yet soft

at the same time.

The sound

of hoofbeats,

is deafening,

and the dirt

in my mouth

is disgusting.

The horse’s

breathing

is scratchy,

and I know

she is tiring.

The salty sweat,

that has been

dripping off

my face,

is starting

to find its

way into

my mouth.

The warm

summer breeze

is a nice change

from the

burning sun,

as we run

away from

all the troubles

of the world

together.

 

Comments (14)

Jayde B. said

at 10:48 am on May 8, 2014

Great job, I really can get a clear picture, it's like I am riding with you....

Jordan B said

at 10:53 am on May 8, 2014

It ade me feel like I was riding the horse good job!

Croy S. said

at 11:00 am on May 8, 2014

I liked how you went through every motion of riding the horse.

Jenna O said

at 11:02 am on May 8, 2014

I love how you describe everything clearly about the horse.. Made me get a great picture of what it would look like

Carter H said

at 11:03 am on May 8, 2014

It felt like i was actually riding a horse, great job

Grace K. said

at 11:06 am on May 8, 2014

you made a really good picture to look at and see

Anthony F. said

at 11:07 am on May 8, 2014

It was like i could see myself doing this.

Kayla K. said

at 11:07 am on May 8, 2014

I like how you describe the horse and describe the hotness.

Tatum K said

at 11:08 am on May 8, 2014

I like how you described not only what you were feeling, but also what the horse was feeling.

William M said

at 11:13 am on May 8, 2014

Great job describing how you are riding the horse, and how you are trying not to fall off of her.

Garrett L said

at 11:16 am on May 8, 2014

I like how you describe that you have to hang on.

Rachel D said

at 11:19 am on May 8, 2014

I liked all your details, I could feel the momentum and power of the horse. It felt like I was actually there! Great Job!

Ben F. said

at 11:21 am on May 8, 2014

I like how you described the sun shining down on you.

Mrs. K. said

at 3:13 pm on May 12, 2014

Great description from the start to the end. I felt like I was there with you on the horse.

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