I liked the descriptive words you used.

I like how detailed you are on how you feel and what hear when entering the barn.

Great job Rachel!! I Felt as if I was actually there!(:

I like how heavenly the barn feels.

I like the detailed descriptions in what is happening, good job

I liked the way you described the creaky wooden door

I like how you describe the morning.

I like how you said "Crisp morning air biting at my skin." I could imagine going out into the morning.

I love how you separated out the last 3 lines to emphasize how it felt to be
there.
in the barn.

I liked how you thought the feed smelled sweet.

I liked how told us all the sounds you herd.

When you said the word crisp at the begining that got my attention right away and made me really want to read it

I got a clear visual picture. Great job!

Great emphasis on the last little bit, very good. It really drew me in.