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AnthonyF

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Middle of Football Practice

 

It was a hot summer day.

School is about to start.

I am at football practice.

Out on the field I could see green grass.

I could see the pads hit together.

Players doing stretches.

I was standing on the sideline drinking water.

I felt breathless, and sweat dripping from my head.

My uniform was soaked in sweat.

I could smell the dirt on my jersey,

And the smell of sweat shirts.

Practice was over and me and my dad were on our way home.

I was thinking about what our first game will be.

Practices are really tough but they are fun when it comes to games.

 

Comments (11)

Kayla K. said

at 10:50 am on May 8, 2014

I like how you describe what it is like in football. It made me image what was going on.

Garrett L said

at 10:51 am on May 8, 2014

I like how you describe whats going on.

Allie W said

at 10:51 am on May 8, 2014

I liked all the details and descriptions you had. Good job!

Tatum K said

at 10:52 am on May 8, 2014

I could imagine how you felt after you had to go through a hard practice. Good job!

William M said

at 10:53 am on May 8, 2014

I like how you described how sweaty you were.

Grace K. said

at 10:57 am on May 8, 2014

I like your description of everything that you smelt and felt

Croy S. said

at 11:03 am on May 8, 2014

Good job on describing what happens at football practice.

Jayde B. said

at 11:04 am on May 8, 2014

I liked how a lot of your poem was about smell, different, in a good way.

Jenna O said

at 11:06 am on May 8, 2014

Great job with details and description. Got a great picture in my mind!

Jordan B said

at 11:16 am on May 8, 2014

I liked how you said the jesey was soaked and the pads hitting togfether it made me feel like playing football again

Alexis G. said

at 11:22 am on May 8, 2014

I like how you described the jerseys and what the practice was like, Nice Job.

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