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JustinK

Page history last edited by Justin K. 6 years, 2 months ago

A Day Of Hauling

     I see geese and ducks flying on both sides of me,

     They are trying to avoid getting hit by the waves I’m making with the tractor and spreader,

     I start the spreader and poop flies like fireworks,

     I hear the tractor engine as I drive down the field with the sound of the spreader shaking,

     I turn my head and with bad luck manure lands in my mouth,

     I stop the spreader and head back,

     I see black and white creatures walking around eating grass while I come in,

     The cows don’t even take notice of me,

     And all the while I do this again and again.

 

Comments (18)

Andrew H. said

at 8:03 am on May 8, 2014

I could see you driving the tractor in the fields

Jace said

at 8:09 am on May 8, 2014

I could see you doing your job on the farm.

Elizabeth G said

at 8:10 am on May 8, 2014

I like how you end with the idea of repeating the same monotonous day over and over.

Kaleigh W said

at 8:10 am on May 8, 2014

I got a clear picture of everything that was happening.

SierraC said

at 8:11 am on May 8, 2014

It makes a image very clear to mind with the tractor

Elreicha said

at 8:11 am on May 8, 2014

I could see you driving the tractor.

Wyatt V. said

at 8:14 am on May 8, 2014

I could see you doing the work on the farm.

Marin E. said

at 8:20 am on May 8, 2014

You used descriptive words that helped me get the picture of a day of hauling in your life.

Callie L. said

at 8:20 am on May 8, 2014

I liked how you used fireworks to create the picture.

Kyle N said

at 8:22 am on May 8, 2014

I like the last line of your story.

Jessica B said

at 8:25 am on May 8, 2014

It really paints a picture.

Eddie B said

at 8:25 am on May 8, 2014

very descriptive

Joshua said

at 8:27 am on May 8, 2014

Poop flies like fireworks! Thats my favorite part in the poem good job!

Cassie K said

at 8:28 am on May 8, 2014

I could see you driving in the tractor in the field.

Marrah B. said

at 8:32 am on May 8, 2014

I liked the last line of your poem because it gives me a picture of how you dread continuing on.

NathanC said

at 12:39 pm on May 8, 2014

I like how poop went in your mouth and great details

PiperS said

at 8:18 am on May 9, 2014

I could see you driving the tractor for your chores, the detail was very clear.

Mrs. K. said

at 11:59 am on May 12, 2014

Great visual when you say "poop flies like fireworks".

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