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EddieB

Page history last edited by Eddie B 6 years, 2 months ago

Making hay in the summer

The sight of tractors,

baler’s,

dust,

and hay

The sound of the

tractors,

trucks

 rolling tires,

 and balers

The smell of diesel exhaust,

hay,

plants and flowers

The feeling of warm engines,

 hay,

and the leather steering wheel

The taste of dust,

 hay,

and moms food she brings us. 

 

Comments (18)

Wyatt V. said

at 8:05 am on May 8, 2014

Great details makes me want to bail hay

Andrew H. said

at 8:11 am on May 8, 2014

I could see the tractors and trucks good job

Kaleigh W said

at 8:14 am on May 8, 2014

I could actually see what you were doing. Good Job!

Callie L. said

at 8:14 am on May 8, 2014

You made a good visual picture.

Brandi D said

at 8:15 am on May 8, 2014

I like how this gave me a very good picture of bailing hay.

Justin K. said

at 8:17 am on May 8, 2014

You use all the details in such great order

Marrah B. said

at 8:17 am on May 8, 2014

I like the part about diesel exhaust, because that's a very distinct smell.

Kyle N said

at 8:18 am on May 8, 2014

Good details. I saw a tractor bailing hay out in the field

SierraC said

at 8:18 am on May 8, 2014

You can get a clear image of the farm eqiupment

Elreicha said

at 8:19 am on May 8, 2014

I can see the tractors.

Joshua said

at 8:19 am on May 8, 2014

Cool poem I liked how you listed off all the sounds from making hay.

Elizabeth G said

at 8:24 am on May 8, 2014

I like how you repeated the word "hay", it really made me realize the importance of it in the poem.

Jace said

at 8:24 am on May 8, 2014

I could see you working on your farm.

Marin E. said

at 8:27 am on May 8, 2014

I like how you kept saying "hay" because it made your poem fun, and interesting.

Jessica B said

at 8:35 am on May 8, 2014

I like how you put "The smell of diesel exhaust" I can almost smell it.

Dillon L said

at 12:43 pm on May 8, 2014

i like how your details it made me think of one of my favorite sights and one of my favorite smell "the smell of the diesel exhaust"

PiperS said

at 8:23 am on May 9, 2014

I liked the details of all the farm equipment, the highlights on the word hay showed its importance.

Mrs. K. said

at 8:53 am on May 12, 2014

I like how you kept coming back to "hay" because that is what it is all about.

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