Sledding
By Eric
Ryan, Isaac, (cousins) and me were out sledding one day. We found the very very big hill. The slope was around 45-50 degrees. We walked for about 20-25 min to get to the top of the hill. Isaac said that we should race. So Ryan was in the middle I was on the side and Isaac was on the other side. Off we went There were two 5 foot drops that didn’t look so bad until you went off them. Ryan went of the first on a crashed very bad. Then it was Isaac and me there was one last jump and both of us landed. Then there was holes where deer have ate to get food and we flow into the air when we hit them. Then crashed. Then we made a very bad idea me made a jump at the last drop off. So the I when first and I landed it and crashed into the fence. Ryan missed it. Isaac wanted to try his entretup but not on the jump. He went flying down the hill and then the fence was there and he hit it. So then we had to go back to the house so Isaac could recover.
When was where there my brother (Devin) and more cousins(Mark, Sarah, Brad, Steven, Calub) showed up. This time we could use the 4-wheeler. Then we tied a sled behind the 4-wheeler the I grabbed the sled and then we made a train or 3 sleds behind a 4-wheel with 4 people on it. This time we made it up the hill fast, but making it up we another story. The train was so long. We were going around a Then we goin down Calub crash I was behind him and somehow missed him. Then Devin came down with the 4-wheeler with Ryan and Brad. The 4-wheeler even flow off the jumps, but lucky no crashes. We bought up the toboggan we all go on it was off we went. We almost made to field which was about 4-5 1/2 football field long. The we go a ride back up with the 4-wheeler. When we going down Ryan was right in path with a tree. He hit the tree and Ryan won battle with the tree. The tree was a half an inch thick and 4 feet tall. I went down after Ryan killed a tree because he was crying. I lost control of my sled and start going down backwards. There was a drop off that I forgot about and I crash bad. We got Ryan to feel better and we got to sled for another 1 hour. On When made it back. My grandma had bars for us and diner. We all were tired out and got to go home.
Comments (21)
Taylor B. said
at 10:15 am on Dec 12, 2012
I really liked how you made it really intense when you guys hit the tree.
Madisen O said
at 10:16 am on Dec 12, 2012
I liked how you had all the crashes but they all turned out alright.
Angelia H said
at 10:18 am on Dec 12, 2012
I loved the intensity, but I also loved how you make it feel like your right there watching the whole thing.
Kerrigan U said
at 10:19 am on Dec 12, 2012
I like how you give detail about how long and tall stuff was. You described it well and gave me a good picture in my mind of where you were sledding! It was an interesting story!
Jackson L said
at 10:20 am on Dec 12, 2012
I like how you kept it interesting like when they hit the tree and ran into a fence.
Steven M said
at 10:22 am on Dec 12, 2012
I liked how you crashed something every time but still went again.
Austin T said
at 10:22 am on Dec 12, 2012
I really like how many craches you guys had and it was really intense
Noah F. said
at 10:22 am on Dec 12, 2012
I liked the story because of the crashes and that no one got hurt.
Tiffany R said
at 10:24 am on Dec 12, 2012
I liked how everybody was okay at the end.
Allison W said
at 10:28 am on Dec 12, 2012
I'm glad at the end no one got hurt. Good story Eric!
Jaden S said
at 10:28 am on Dec 12, 2012
I liked how you used some expresion when you said you crashed. With all of your details it was very easy for me to come up with a picture in my mind of you sledding and crashing. Good job and im glad nobody hurt them selves while sledding!
Felicity T said
at 10:28 am on Dec 12, 2012
I liked how everyone crashed and was fine in the end.
tanner t said
at 10:06 am on Dec 13, 2012
I liked the intensity! and how you kept going good job!
Taylor N. said
at 10:08 am on Dec 13, 2012
I liked how you explained the hill you were on because it made the crashes even worse. Nice Job!(:
Jaysn R said
at 11:11 am on Dec 13, 2012
you used good expression in your story and i thought it was good
Dawson H said
at 11:15 am on Dec 13, 2012
I like how detailed it was I could picture it in my mind
Brody K said
at 11:26 am on Dec 13, 2012
Nice story i felt like i was in your story.
Faith R said
at 11:27 am on Dec 13, 2012
I could picture your paragraph in my mind!
Allison D said
at 10:30 am on Dec 14, 2012
I really liked how you explained the crashes. I really liked your story.
wyatt w said
at 10:42 am on Dec 14, 2012
I like how you put that he won the battle with the tree.
Andrew W said
at 11:26 am on Dec 14, 2012
i liked how you told me how long and tall the stuff was.
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