Best Friend Christmas ever...
Once upon a time there was a group of girls, Lucy, Talia, Jacey, and Lidia who loved Christmas. They loved everything about it. It was the day before Christmas Break and Jacey wanted to have everyone over to watch movies and play fun games before Christmas break. But Lucy couldn’t because she had to go home after school and watch her siblings. So we figured that we would all still get together without her.
That night Jacey, Talia, and Lida all met at the movie theater at 6:00 to see the movie The Polar Express in 3D. But then we were all hungry so we went to Pizza Ranch and ate supper. But by the time we were done eating the movie had already started so we went bowling instead. Lidia ended up winning. We were done bowling at 8. So we went back to the movie theater because the next movie started at 8:10. So when we got there we only got a little box of candy because we had just ate.
After the movie was done we went to Jacey’s house and watched another movie. Then we had a pillow fight and did each others makeup and hair. It wasn't the best either! We finally fell asleep at 3:30 in the morning. At 8:30 AM Talia heard the doorbell ring, she went up there to see who it was and it was Lucy. She took her downstairs where everyone was sleeping and we woke everyone up by throwing pillows at them.
After everyone was awake we went upstairs and ate breakfast then we opened presents from each other. After we were done we had a fashion show with all of Jacey’s old dress-up clothes. When we were almost done with our fashion show Jacey’s mom told us she was going to go to Wal-Mart, of course we all wanted to go because Wal-Mart is awesome.
When we got to Wal-Mart we wanted to play hide-and-seek. So Jacey and Talia went to hide and Lucy and Lidia sat on the bench to count. Jacey and Talia went to hide in McDonalds. They texted Lucy and Lidia and told them they were ready. It took them 10 minutes to find them!!!! Then Jacey’s mom told us it was time to go home so she took us all back to our own house. And that was the best friend Christmas ever!:)
Comments (23)
Taylor N. said
at 10:19 am on Dec 12, 2012
I really liked that you used experiences you had with you and your friends!(; Good Job!(:
Taylor B. said
at 10:31 am on Dec 12, 2012
I really liked your story because you kept it interesting when Lucy couldn't come but then in the morning she came and then hit them with pillows. It was funny!
Austin T said
at 10:41 am on Dec 12, 2012
I really liked the story it was funny and you kept me interested. It was really funny too!
Jackson L said
at 10:42 am on Dec 12, 2012
I like the story and how you switched from one thing to another it kept it interesting.
Madisen O said
at 10:01 am on Dec 13, 2012
It was a good story I liked how it told all of the things that you friends did and when Lucy through pillows at the girls, pretty funny.
Kerrigan U said
at 10:04 am on Dec 13, 2012
I liked your story because you added personal experiences but changed it up a little bit! It was interesting! Good Job!
Steven M said
at 10:06 am on Dec 13, 2012
I liked how you kept it interesting.
Angelia H said
at 10:07 am on Dec 13, 2012
I loved how you made it sound like lots of fun! My favorite part was when Jacey and Talia hid in McDonalds. Good story!!
Danae T said
at 10:09 am on Dec 13, 2012
I like how all the girls were together and had so much fun.
Eric F said
at 10:16 am on Dec 13, 2012
I like it how they went to Wal-Mart a play hide and go seek. I think that made real interesting.
Noah F. said
at 10:21 am on Dec 13, 2012
I really liked the story because it just sounded fun.
Allison W said
at 10:25 am on Dec 13, 2012
I think this story is good because it tells about friends and how they are very close. I thought that this story was really interesting. Good story Tiffany!!
Dawn B said
at 10:33 am on Dec 13, 2012
You were talk about them like they were real!!!!
Jaden S said
at 10:36 am on Dec 13, 2012
Good job! I liked how you really went into detail about what you guys all did. And I thought it was sounded fun when you talked about Wal-Mart:)
tanner t said
at 10:40 am on Dec 13, 2012
I thought it was really funny how they hid in Mcdonald's Good story!
Brody K said
at 11:19 am on Dec 13, 2012
Very good story and good transitions.
Andrew W said
at 11:25 am on Dec 13, 2012
i like how you threw pillow at them to wake them up
Felicity T said
at 9:34 pm on Dec 13, 2012
I liked how you explained everything well and how it about Christmas!
Jaysn R said
at 11:14 am on Dec 14, 2012
I liked how you told us how you spent christmas with your friends.
Kenzi J said
at 11:20 am on Dec 14, 2012
Very nice you had a lot of detail that told what exactly happened and when it happened.
Dawson H said
at 11:22 am on Dec 14, 2012
It was very good and detailed about a sleep over
Jena M said
at 11:32 am on Dec 14, 2012
I like how you started your story and good details!
wyatt w said
at 2:18 pm on Dec 14, 2012
I like how you put that lucy comes later.
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