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Colton L

Page history last edited by Colton L 6 years, 9 months ago

The living blob
 
     It was a typical on Monday in Dexter’s lab, when Dexter decides to create a masterpiece out of many things. He got a blob mix, turtle wire, fox hair, chemicals, and explosives.

 

When he was creating his masterpiece his evil rabbit snowball tips his bring to life potion into the pot, which Dexter did not no.  When Dexter pours the ingredients in, nothing happens. The goo is still not moving, so Dexter goes up stairs to watch his favorite show in Dexter’s laboratory. Mean while, down stairs the goo is climbing out of the box and eating everything but, the blob eats his zombie potion, which makes anything a zombie. When the blob goes upstairs to find something to eat, he sees Dexter, and he starts to head for Dexter but Dexter sees him and screams and runs away.


His evil rabbit is controlling the blob with a remote and attacking everything that is in front of it. When the blob heads for town, it gets hit by cars, a horse eats a part of it, thinking it is grass, it gets hit by a car again. A little kid thinks it’s a bench and when it gets to, town it dies.  The Rabbit rage quits and Dexter is still running away from something. But wait there’s more, after the rabbit rages, the blob gets hit by acid rain, which brings it back to life.

 

The blob goes into town, eats a cat and keeps going than it eats a dog. Which didn’t go so well, the owner of the dog pulls out is tazer and tazes the blob, and that didn’t go so well either, the blob ate both of them. Bad news is that the more the blob eats, the bigger is gets. The blob is now 10 feet tall after eating 5 cats, 3 dogs and 1 human. The blob heads for a science fair room which there a is multiplier that can make clones of anything, the blob walks past the multiplier when it is being tested and the blast hits the blob and makes 1 more blob and then 4 than 10, than 100 and everyone is eating then the blob dies from eating everything. 

 

After a while the rabbit comes out of the house and sees everything destroyed. So he finds Dexter who is still running away from the blob.  So they try and figure a way out destroy the blob before they come back to life. They put poison in the blobs so they don't come back to life. When they put the poison in it killed them and they lived happily ever after. 
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Comments (19)

Joshua said

at 8:08 am on Apr 1, 2014

That is an awesome story! In the 2nd paragraph it should be "know" instead of "no" you know?

Elreicha said

at 8:27 am on Apr 1, 2014

Cool story, I liked the end.

Justin K. said

at 8:31 am on Apr 1, 2014

The blob causes the story to rise and rise and rise.

PiperS said

at 8:51 am on Apr 1, 2014

I like how it is crazy from start to finish and how it spirals out of control.

Kaleigh W said

at 7:52 am on Apr 2, 2014

I liked how you could never tell what the blob was going to do and it makes you want to keep reading.

Jace said

at 7:53 am on Apr 2, 2014

I like how the blob is destroying everything in its path.

Andrew H. said

at 7:56 am on Apr 2, 2014

I liked how one little thing turns into a BIG problem. Good story.

Wyatt V. said

at 8:09 am on Apr 2, 2014

I like how you made the blob die because it ate to many things.

Elizabeth G said

at 8:10 am on Apr 2, 2014

I really enjoy how the blob comes back to life with acid rain.

Ryan H said

at 8:17 am on Apr 2, 2014

Very Nice, Love the Name Dexter!

Jessica K. said

at 8:02 am on Apr 3, 2014

Very interesting Colton. I liked how they all lived happily ever after.

Marrah B. said

at 8:04 am on Apr 3, 2014

I like how you made it unexpected by saying the blob comes back to life!

Brandi D said

at 8:04 am on Apr 3, 2014

I like how you made it a crazy story, great job!

Kyle N said

at 8:05 am on Apr 3, 2014

I like how the blob came back to life.

AllisonB. said

at 8:15 am on Apr 3, 2014

You put a few surprises into your story and that made you want to keep reading.

Callie L. said

at 8:16 am on Apr 3, 2014

I like the idea of the blob getting bigger every time it eats something!

Eddie B said

at 8:25 am on Apr 3, 2014

i like how the blob destroyed every thing

Marin E. said

at 8:29 am on Apr 3, 2014

I like how this story had a twist to it because the blob came back alive.

Cassie K said

at 4:01 pm on Apr 3, 2014

Good job. I like the part that blob is eating the cat other thing.

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