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Delaney M

Page history last edited by Delaney M 8 years, 4 months ago

                                                                      Not Now, Not here.

Not now, not here,

I only wish to talk.

Not now, not here,

I only wish to visit.

Not now, not here,

I did not mean what I said.

Not now, not here,

I only meant to say I’m sorry.

Not now, not here,

Let me see tomorrow.

Not now, not here,

I can feel your sorrow.

Not now, not here,

Please, Please my dear,

Not now, not here.

Just let me explain,

Not now, not here,

I meant to end it

Not now, not here,

Just go home.

Not now, not here

We will talk tomorrow.

Not now, not here,

Get some rest now my dear.

Just not now.

Just not here.

I don’t want to scare you.

I just need you to know, that it is

You. And just you. And only you.

And it always will be.

If you dare think otherwise,

My heart will shatter

Before my eyes.

Not now, not here.

Just know you are the only one.

If that is not known to thee,

The one and only,

You.

And just you.

And always you.

 

Comments (22)

Mrs. K. said

at 12:39 pm on Feb 27, 2012

Where is the rest? You should have more to equal a page and a half.

Cassie W said

at 11:55 am on Feb 28, 2012

I love your poetry! It always is so interesting and gets a litte film going in my head.

Alexis G said

at 11:55 am on Feb 28, 2012

I liked how you wrote the poem in a dialog type it sounds like you were telling a conversation that you had in your own words!

Chase T said

at 11:56 am on Feb 28, 2012

i really liked the poem but i kinda didnt get it

Jaylee H said

at 11:59 am on Feb 28, 2012

I liked how you did poetry. It was a love story, and I liked that.

GraceK said

at 12:00 pm on Feb 28, 2012

I liked how you kept saying not now not here and then saying a reason for why not

Morgan E. said

at 12:01 pm on Feb 28, 2012

I got the whole thing and got a little image in my head

Taylor D said

at 12:02 pm on Feb 28, 2012

I have always loved your poems Delaney and this is a great one i cant wait to read more of your poems.

Lukas O said

at 12:04 pm on Feb 28, 2012

I love your poetry it is always so interesting.

William M said

at 12:05 pm on Feb 28, 2012

I like how in the start it kept repeating not now not here.

Jordan E said

at 12:08 pm on Feb 28, 2012

you are very good at poetry and very interesting

Cheyenne K said

at 12:09 pm on Feb 28, 2012

it was fun to read i love the way you made two people talk

Delaney M said

at 6:24 pm on Feb 28, 2012

Thank you guys!

Croy S said

at 7:41 pm on Feb 28, 2012

I liked it how it was in poetry form, good job!

Claire H said

at 8:15 pm on Feb 28, 2012

I love your poem how it is so interesting and how you can think on just one topic and right a poem like that.

Courtney M said

at 11:57 am on Feb 29, 2012

I like how it is poem form

Joe B said

at 11:57 am on Feb 29, 2012

i like the poem format

Allison B said

at 12:00 pm on Feb 29, 2012

I liked how you wrote a poem instead of a story.

Bradley N said

at 12:04 pm on Feb 29, 2012

I agree with Allison because you are always writing poems.

Andrea D said

at 12:07 pm on Feb 29, 2012

I liked the poem it was really good i liked it how it was in poem format also

Hannah M said

at 4:34 pm on Feb 29, 2012

I like how you did a poem, and how you used the poem format!

Faith J said

at 11:30 am on Mar 1, 2012

I like the poem.

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