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Cassie K

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                                                                               My best birthday


            It was August 10. I was so exited because it is going to be the best birthday ever. I invited my friends. I called my friends to invited them  over for my birthday party. The date of my birthday party is August 10 at 11:00 am also there will be a sleepover. I invited 3 of my friends from my old school Charles City. I was dress like a princess. 


            At the party we did lot of games. Some of the games we did was Sorry, Twister, and Candy Land. All of us played Twister and my mom did the spinner. 


            We had Chinese food for lunch and than cake and ice cream at my birthday party. The cake flavor was marble and the ice cream was chocolate and vanilla. My mom made the cake and homemade ice cream. We played more game.


           Then we opened my present. I got lot of present. They are very nice. My favorite present was a girl kitten and a new dress. The kittens name was Suzy. We had a sleepover. We stay up to midnight. We painted our nails and toenails, and we told secrets. Also we were playing with our kitten Suzy. It was the best day ever. We are so tired but we were sleep in. We woke up at 10:00 am.  




Comments (15)

PiperS said

at 7:50 am on Apr 2, 2014

I like how the story gave off a very happy feeling and you could tell you had a good time.

Kaleigh W said

at 7:55 am on Apr 2, 2014

I liked how we knew that you were excited and to have your friends come over.

Elizabeth G said

at 8:01 am on Apr 2, 2014

I like how everyone was so happy and you and your friends did a lot of things together.

Jace said

at 8:02 am on Apr 2, 2014

I like how excited you were and that you were happy at your birthday.

Jessica K. said

at 6:05 am on Apr 3, 2014

Cassie, I really like how this story was about a birthday party. It sounded like fun!

Wyatt V. said

at 7:59 am on Apr 3, 2014

I liked how you showed how happy you were.

Marrah B. said

at 7:59 am on Apr 3, 2014

I like how you get a sense of happiness when you read this story!

Kyle N said

at 8:03 am on Apr 3, 2014

You made it sound very happy.

Callie L. said

at 8:06 am on Apr 3, 2014

I liked how you described the events and told us your favorite part of each one!

AllisonB. said

at 8:07 am on Apr 3, 2014

Your story was very organized because you listed the events in steps.

Eddie B said

at 8:09 am on Apr 3, 2014

The story sounded real fun and exciting

Marin E. said

at 8:23 am on Apr 3, 2014

I like how the story was happy and light-hearted.

Joshua said

at 8:23 am on Apr 3, 2014

I liked your story because you sounded really happy and excited

Andrew H. said

at 8:23 am on Apr 3, 2014

Sounds like you had a fun day, good story!

Justin K. said

at 8:29 am on Apr 3, 2014

It was very well written

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