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Ben F

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When I Went to Disney World

 

 

         When I went to Disney World I went with my family. All six of us my dad my mom, Jacqueline, Alex, me and Rebecca. We all packed two days before we left. So if we for got something we had time to pack it. It was the night before we left and I could not sleep that night. I was so excited we go up really early to leave for the plan. We got to the airport around 6:30 am. We sat there in the airport waiting for the plain it finally came. It was 8:00 when we got on the plain. I had never been on a plain before. So I was so excited we started to move the plain was headed for the run way. We took off I liked the feeling when you first come off the ground. When you like fly up out of your seat until your seatbelt stops you.

 

          We were in the air flying to Florida it was a long trip I sat in my window seat and watched the clouds go by. It was a cloudy day you could not see the ground at all. The clouds were cool to look at to the wavy bumpiness to them. We made it to the airport and it was nice to be on the ground I was sick on the plain. Before we got off the plain we all noticed the that the workers on the ground were wearing shorts and t-shirts. We went in the middle of January when it was cold and snowy.

 

We got there it was sunny warm and was 65ºF that’s a great start to are trip. We walked through the air port all the way to the other side and we got are bags and had to buy a buss ticket to get on the Disney buss that takes you all around the parks and to the hotels and all that stuff. The buss was nice it had plug ins in the walls. It was a long buss ride the hotel we made it. It was a Toy Story themed hotel. There was to rooms for the six of us my mom and dad shard room and the four kids shard the other room. They had the double doors between them. We unpacked and then went out for dinner because we all were hungry after the long plain ride. We had a quick dinner because we wanted to go swimming the pool. We got back from swimming around 10:05. We all went to bed but I did not sleep I was so excised about the park we are going to the next day.  

 

We all got up around 6:30 so we could get ready to eat. We went  to the restaurant next to the hotel I had pancakes with wiped cream. It was time to get on the buss to go to the first park. The end.

 

Comments (17)

Kayla K. said

at 11:14 am on Apr 1, 2014

I like how you have lots of details and descriptions.

William M said

at 11:16 am on Apr 1, 2014

I like how you talked a lot about the time, and the setting.

Anthony F. said

at 11:16 am on Apr 1, 2014

I liked how you added all the little details about the plane ride

Jayde B. said

at 11:17 am on Apr 1, 2014

I like how you describe the way you in the story felt when the plane took off and the bus ride.

Bradley N said

at 11:19 am on Apr 1, 2014

I like how you wrote this story in first person view. GREAT JOB BEN!

Garrett L said

at 11:20 am on Apr 1, 2014

I like way you explained how you felt during the whole trip.

Jordan B said

at 11:20 am on Apr 1, 2014

I went to Disney world a few years ago too. I also liked how you left us hanging on what was happening next.

Allie W said

at 11:22 am on Apr 1, 2014

You had very nice details and I liked how you described how you were feeling.

Croy S. said

at 11:22 am on Apr 1, 2014

I like all the descriptions of the plane and the hotel. Good Job.

Grace K. said

at 10:43 am on Apr 2, 2014

I liked how you expressed what was happening

Andrea D said

at 10:49 am on Apr 2, 2014

I liked how you went in to detail about how you were feeling at the time.

Carter H said

at 10:50 am on Apr 2, 2014

The way you described the plane ride was cool. Good job.

Alexis G. said

at 10:54 am on Apr 2, 2014

I liked the way that you described the plane and what was happening on the plane and also nice descriptive words. Nice Job

Jenna O said

at 11:04 am on Apr 2, 2014

Great descriptions and details.

Tatum K said

at 11:09 am on Apr 2, 2014

You did good at describing what you saw and what you felt like. It made it fun to read!

Rachel D said

at 11:02 am on Apr 3, 2014

I liked how described what it felt like on the plane and what the clouds looked like. Nice Job!

Kassi S. said

at 12:41 pm on Apr 3, 2014

I liked how you described all of the events that you did! And how you made me feel like I was there with you. Nice descriptive words, and nice voice! Great Job!

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