Nice poem, I like the description of your feelings.

Good description of how you felt.

Oh golf, what a great sport.

Great details.

I could feel and relate to how nervous you were. Good description.

Good word usage.

I could really feel how nervous you were.

Great details and desrciption

nice description! i miss golf!(:

you did a good job describing your feelings in the poem.

I like how you described how nervous you were.

I liked how you said you won at the end instead of leaving us to guess.

Your feelings were described very well.

I like how you explained your nerves on your way to the meet.

The way you described your nerves helped me understand better. Nicely done.

Nice job describing how nervous you were.

Lexi, I liked when you said, longest bus ride ever, because it showed how you couldn't wait to start golfing and find out how your first meet would go.

I like how you used short phrases to describe the things that were happening.

Nice job describing feelings

You did a good job on describing how the situation played out.

Good job describing your emotions.

I can relate to that. I definitely felt nervous and then relieved after I hit a good shot.

I can relate to when you said shaking on the tee off getting ready to play, the first meet I was very nervous too.

I can get a clear picture of how nervous you were. Great poem.

I liked how you showed your emotion during the bus ride

Good description. I plan on doing golf this year!

I like how it says longest ride ever, that explains how nervous you were.

Its nice to know how you felt on that day because i felt the exact same way. Nicely done.

Nice job! Glad you guys won. Great job describing.

Good description of your nervousness.

Nice description of your feelings, the nervousness and then the relief.

i like how the poem is green

I can relate to your nervous feelings for your first meet.

Could relate to having to wait to be dismissed from school and being nervous for a game or meet. Good descriptions of what happened when you got there.

I like how you built up the feeling of nervousness by talking about the bus ride and sitting in class waiting to be dismissed, then the relief after getting the first shot over with!

great description