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LexiM

Page history last edited by Lexi M. 8 years, 9 months ago

First Golf Meet

 

Freshman year

my first golf meet

extremely nervous

waiting to be dismissed

longest bus ride ever

to the Elkader Golf Course

anxiously waiting to begin

while discussing rules

walking to the first hole

getting ready to tee off

shaking on the tee box

feeling of relief

after first tee shot

golfing well for the

first time on the course

excited with my final score

team victory 

 

Comments (36)

Dawn T. said

at 8:39 am on Sep 20, 2011

Nice poem, I like the description of your feelings.

Mallory B. said

at 10:01 am on Sep 20, 2011

Good description of how you felt.

Jodi S said

at 10:20 am on Sep 20, 2011

Oh golf, what a great sport.

JacquelineF said

at 12:27 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Great details.

Carly L. said

at 12:57 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I could feel and relate to how nervous you were. Good description.

Ashlee E said

at 1:00 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Good word usage.

Bethany P. said

at 1:01 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I could really feel how nervous you were.

dalton said

at 1:03 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Great details and desrciption

Spencer A said

at 1:07 pm on Sep 20, 2011

nice description! i miss golf!(:

Koree said

at 1:12 pm on Sep 20, 2011

you did a good job describing your feelings in the poem.

Will I said

at 1:12 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I like how you described how nervous you were.

Maria C said

at 1:17 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I liked how you said you won at the end instead of leaving us to guess.

Austen B said

at 1:18 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Your feelings were described very well.

Shauna K said

at 1:18 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I like how you explained your nerves on your way to the meet.

Toni R. said

at 1:22 pm on Sep 20, 2011

The way you described your nerves helped me understand better. Nicely done.

Sydney B said

at 1:26 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Nice job describing how nervous you were.

Emily B. said

at 1:28 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Lexi, I liked when you said, longest bus ride ever, because it showed how you couldn't wait to start golfing and find out how your first meet would go.

Amy D said

at 1:32 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I like how you used short phrases to describe the things that were happening.

Nick B. said

at 1:42 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Nice job describing feelings

Logan D said

at 1:43 pm on Sep 20, 2011

You did a good job on describing how the situation played out.

Carly M said

at 1:44 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Good job describing your emotions.

Sam K said

at 1:45 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I can relate to that. I definitely felt nervous and then relieved after I hit a good shot.

Chandler L. said

at 1:47 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I can relate to when you said shaking on the tee off getting ready to play, the first meet I was very nervous too.

Jenna H. said

at 1:47 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I can get a clear picture of how nervous you were. Great poem.

Chris T said

at 1:47 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I liked how you showed your emotion during the bus ride

James said

at 1:48 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Good description. I plan on doing golf this year!

cody t said

at 1:49 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I like how it says longest ride ever, that explains how nervous you were.

Alison M said

at 1:49 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Its nice to know how you felt on that day because i felt the exact same way. Nicely done.

Kynzee O said

at 1:51 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Nice job! Glad you guys won. Great job describing.

cody o said

at 1:51 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Good description of your nervousness.

Cayley H. said

at 1:52 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Nice description of your feelings, the nervousness and then the relief.

Sam C said

at 2:00 pm on Sep 20, 2011

i like how the poem is green

Mike B said

at 2:18 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I can relate to your nervous feelings for your first meet.

Kathryn A said

at 3:52 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Could relate to having to wait to be dismissed from school and being nervous for a game or meet. Good descriptions of what happened when you got there.

Mrs. K. said

at 9:09 am on Sep 22, 2011

I like how you built up the feeling of nervousness by talking about the bus ride and sitting in class waiting to be dismissed, then the relief after getting the first shot over with!

Courtland E said

at 11:46 am on Sep 23, 2011

great description

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