You described the game very well

Well said i attended that game way to describe it like it was.

Games against Postville are always exciting.

Great description.

I like how you go into detail about how you pitched.

VERY NICE! Great discription

Good job describing

I like the description.

I could clearly picture what was happening, great poem.

Nice details!

I like how you made it suspenseful.

Oh eh indeed it was the greatest game of the year. Blue collar was awesome. Dont forget Mcdonalds and how we were almost late for the second game! Couldn't have described it any better.

Nice use of details.

good description on baseball

All the descriptions were amazing.

Nice use of words

good job telling where everyone was and how you felt about your pitching.

I like the intensity you put into the last section of your poem.

i felt like i was watching the game myself...nice description!(:

I liked how you were certain that Riley was safe, but then second-guessed it. It made it suspenseful.

I like how you described what radio station you were listening to on the way there.

Sounded intense and i can relate to those kind of games. Good job!

I like how you made the game sound intense and then described how the end turned out.

Good job describing how the game went.

I liked the intensity and details of the poem.

You made it sound like a lot fun which isn't easy to do.

nice description of the game

I liked your description of the last at bat

I like how you talk about winning.

Cody, I liked the section in the middle where you where explaining what was happening in the game and put spaces after every thought. It made it a lot easier to follow.

I can tell how much you love baseball from reading this.

Im sure playing with no worries is a relief. Nice job describing a whole game into just few words.

I like how you capture the different images of the game, not just the play by play, but even the bus ride leading up to it. It helps to give the reader a better feeling of the total moment.

I liked how you described the things that happened leading up to your baseball game.

I liked the last two lines of your poem because they tie together the loose ends. I really like how you described that even though your win loss record didn't show it you were still having fun.

Liked that you told the whole story and not just bits and pieces.