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CodyO

Page history last edited by cody o 8 years, 6 months ago

Cody Opperman

Plow Fixing

 

I climb underneath the green plow

Careful of the brown blades

Tim hands me a pipe wrench

Wrench of downfall

Holding the backside of the gang

With wrench to bolt

Tim starts to tighten with his wrench

Wrench braced against frame

Wait while he cranks nut down

Wrench snaps away from the frame

Hit in right hand

Extreme pain

Did not know were it hurts 

In bad way

Crawl out from under the plow

Sprint to bathroom

See that flesh stick out

My right ring finger

Wash it off with cold water

Let it run over the end finger

White flesh coming out

Wound at the end of finger

It was crushed out

For there was nothing sharp

I was so drunk with pain

I thought did not need the hospital

Even with an inch by two inches

Strange thing stick out of my finger

But I still went anyway 

Comments (36)

Nick B. said

at 2:06 pm on Sep 19, 2011

Field work gotta love, it great description!

Logan D said

at 2:15 pm on Sep 19, 2011

Very good description.

James said

at 2:20 pm on Sep 19, 2011

good discription.

Carly L. said

at 2:21 pm on Sep 19, 2011

I like your description.

Kynzee O said

at 2:21 pm on Sep 19, 2011

Great description

Jodi S said

at 10:35 am on Sep 20, 2011

Great details.

JacquelineF said

at 12:45 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Nice Details.

dalton said

at 1:04 pm on Sep 20, 2011

good desrciption on cutting your finger off.

Ashlee E said

at 1:06 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Awesome details. Nice work

Bethany P. said

at 1:07 pm on Sep 20, 2011

The details were fantastic

Austen B said

at 1:11 pm on Sep 20, 2011

It detailed very nicely. Doesn't sound liked a pleasant time!

Koree said

at 1:15 pm on Sep 20, 2011

good job with description, i felt your pain.

Spencer A said

at 1:15 pm on Sep 20, 2011

bet that one hurt! nice one slick! Good description

Maria C said

at 1:19 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Ouch! Sounds like that one hurt.

Shauna K said

at 1:19 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Good description on field work.

Will I said

at 1:24 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I like how you described the injury.

Toni R. said

at 1:24 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Sounds like it hurt, way to describe.

Lexi M. said

at 1:43 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Good description of the scene, sounds like it hurt.

Mallory B. said

at 1:44 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Good job with describing the actions you did in order.

Carly M said

at 1:45 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Great job describing.

Sam C said

at 1:48 pm on Sep 20, 2011

sounds painful

Sam K said

at 1:48 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Sounds like a gruesome experience and you did a good job of making that clear.

Cayley H. said

at 1:50 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I liked your description on the color of things around you at the beginning.

Chris T said

at 1:50 pm on Sep 20, 2011

You described the pain you felt well

cody t said

at 1:51 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Good description of your injury.

Emily B. said

at 1:51 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Cody, you did a good job of expressing how much pain you were in with the metaphor, drunk with pain.

Kynzee O said

at 1:51 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I liked when you said drunk with pain.

Chandler L. said

at 1:51 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Your details about your finger make my finger hurt!

Geordan H said

at 1:53 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I like your use of words

Jenna H. said

at 2:01 pm on Sep 20, 2011

It sounds like it really must have hurt. Great description.

Alison M said

at 2:05 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Nice job describing your wound.

Sydney B said

at 2:12 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I got a good visual picture of what your finger looked like by the way you described it.

Mike B said

at 2:24 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Good job describing the pain you were in.

Mrs. K. said

at 2:25 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Ick. You definitely gave us all a good visual picture of what your finger looked like and how it felt. I did like the "drunk with pain" part too.

Kathryn A said

at 3:57 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I can't imagine how much that hurt, but you described it very well.

Courtland E said

at 11:54 am on Sep 23, 2011

Nice description

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