I like how you described how you felt the first time you drove.

I like that you wrote things that readers can relate to.

I like that you included the "longing" to drive.

Great description!

I like how you described how you felt.

I like how you did this poem.

Great description

Good detail in describing how you begin to drive.

I can relate to this when I received my permit. good poem

Great use of details.

The description is very good.

i can imagen how you felt

Great job, I can relate and I like your description.

Nice details, I know what you're talking about.

I like how you said you were scared to death, gives your feelings.

I love how you were scared to death!

I like how you wrote about something we can all relate to.

The feelings all seemed so real and relatable.

very nice description in the whole poem!

makes me remember drives ed

I like how you described the way driving made you feel.

is so beautiful, loved the description :)

good way to describe a beginner driver.

Reminded me how I felt that day. Good job Carlaaaaa

I liked how you talked about the uncertainty you felt while driving the first time.

Your descriptions of being a beginning driver were good.

Carly, I loved the line where you said, always being told to slow down, because I can totally hear your dad or mom saying that to you!

I like how you described how big of a deal it was for you to drive, even though you were only driving on the backstreets of Clermont. Nice job describing your feelings!

Good word usages.

Your poem is kind of like mine. In the beginning you're nervous but then you realize its not that bad after all.

Could relate to how scared you were the first time driving a car

I like how you said you were scared to death, i can easily see you being scared. I enjoyed being able to relate.

You did a good job of describing an experience that was original and not something you would expect to hear.

I liked how you described how you felt driving

You did a good job explaining all your feelings about driving.

Good job! That is a very good feeling.

Good job describing your feelings of driving.

I like your description of how driving made you feel.

I like how you said that you were always being told to slow down on the corners. It reminded me of some of my first driving experiences.

your feelings were captured very well

I liked how you caught both the excitement and the apprehension of this new step in your life. You look forward to it for so long, but yet it is a little scary too!