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CarlyM

Page history last edited by Carly M 8 years, 6 months ago

First Driving Experience

 

 

Freshman year

Received driving permit

Longed for this day

Understanding driving and safety precautions

Finally my turn to drive

Down the backstreets of Clermont

Scared to death

Not knowing how to turn corners

Always being told to slow down

Finally getting the hang of how to operate the vehicle

Realizing that driving wasn’t so bad after all

 

Comments (Show all 42)

Cayley H. said

at 2:10 pm on Sep 19, 2011

I like that you included the "longing" to drive.

Nick B. said

at 2:14 pm on Sep 19, 2011

Great description!

Sam C said

at 2:14 pm on Sep 19, 2011

I like how you described how you felt.

James said

at 2:16 pm on Sep 19, 2011

I like how you did this poem.

Kynzee O said

at 2:17 pm on Sep 19, 2011

Great description

Jenna H. said

at 2:18 pm on Sep 19, 2011

Good detail in describing how you begin to drive.

Chandler L. said

at 2:18 pm on Sep 19, 2011

I can relate to this when I received my permit. good poem

JacquelineF said

at 2:19 pm on Sep 19, 2011

Great use of details.

Geordan H said

at 2:21 pm on Sep 19, 2011

The description is very good.

kenzie E said

at 7:29 pm on Sep 19, 2011

i can imagen how you felt

Lexi M. said

at 10:11 pm on Sep 19, 2011

Great job, I can relate and I like your description.

Dawn T. said

at 8:36 am on Sep 20, 2011

Nice details, I know what you're talking about.

Mallory B. said

at 10:01 am on Sep 20, 2011

I like how you said you were scared to death, gives your feelings.

Jodi S said

at 10:11 am on Sep 20, 2011

I love how you were scared to death!

Carly L. said

at 12:56 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I like how you wrote about something we can all relate to.

Bethany P. said

at 12:57 pm on Sep 20, 2011

The feelings all seemed so real and relatable.

Spencer A said

at 1:01 pm on Sep 20, 2011

very nice description in the whole poem!

dalton said

at 1:03 pm on Sep 20, 2011

dalton said

at 1:03 pm on Sep 20, 2011

makes me remember drives ed

Will I said

at 1:07 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I like how you described the way driving made you feel.

Ashley G. said

at 1:08 pm on Sep 20, 2011

is so beautiful, loved the description :)

Koree said

at 1:12 pm on Sep 20, 2011

good way to describe a beginner driver.

Ashlee E said

at 1:12 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Reminded me how I felt that day. Good job Carlaaaaa

Maria C said

at 1:16 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I liked how you talked about the uncertainty you felt while driving the first time.

Shauna K said

at 1:18 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Your descriptions of being a beginning driver were good.

Emily B. said

at 1:18 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Carly, I loved the line where you said, always being told to slow down, because I can totally hear your dad or mom saying that to you!

Sydney B said

at 1:20 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I like how you described how big of a deal it was for you to drive, even though you were only driving on the backstreets of Clermont. Nice job describing your feelings!

Toni R. said

at 1:21 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Good word usages.

Amy D said

at 1:24 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Your poem is kind of like mine. In the beginning you're nervous but then you realize its not that bad after all.

rebecca b said

at 1:33 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Could relate to how scared you were the first time driving a car

Alison M said

at 1:43 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I like how you said you were scared to death, i can easily see you being scared. I enjoyed being able to relate.

Sam K said

at 1:44 pm on Sep 20, 2011

You did a good job of describing an experience that was original and not something you would expect to hear.

Chris T said

at 1:46 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I liked how you described how you felt driving

cody t said

at 1:47 pm on Sep 20, 2011

You did a good job explaining all your feelings about driving.

Kynzee O said

at 1:49 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Good job! That is a very good feeling.

cody o said

at 1:50 pm on Sep 20, 2011

Good job describing your feelings of driving.

Mike B said

at 2:16 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I like your description of how driving made you feel.

Kathryn A said

at 3:49 pm on Sep 20, 2011

I like how you said that you were always being told to slow down on the corners. It reminded me of some of my first driving experiences.

Courtland E said

at 11:42 am on Sep 23, 2011

your feelings were captured very well

Mrs. K. said

at 1:58 pm on Sep 27, 2011

I liked how you caught both the excitement and the apprehension of this new step in your life. You look forward to it for so long, but yet it is a little scary too!

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