One day there was a place and it was the best place in the world. Most people are not allowed to live there because they are not material to live in that area . You have to be a god to live in this place. Lots of people wish they could be as good as this place and the people who live there so they try to make them selves feel better by making fun of this place but everyone know they are wrong.
To be excepted into this area you have to be straight up hossen . Most of the stuff that happens there is straight thug life homey. Its just what goes on up there. Some of the activities that they participate in are killing stuff and beating things down, only because they can, and because they are straight thug life. The people here are also so gansta that its hard to hold that much thug life in that small of an area but that’s what makes it so good. When you are that good you tend to get a lot of people who hate on them. Most of these punks are from a rival community that is located on a very smelly river, witch is also were they dump all of Fayette counties trash. It’s a real smelly old place were lots of crime happens. When anyone compares theis two towns any smart normal person could tell you that the first town is way better and has way cooler people in it.
Comments (20)
lincolnm said
at 1:14 pm on May 3, 2011
haha great word choice very descriptive and funny this is one of the greatest debates ever!
rileys said
at 1:15 pm on May 3, 2011
I like how you describe CASTALIA! AMERICA!
Mrs. K. said
at 1:18 pm on May 3, 2011
It was interesting that everything was completely vague in your story except Fayette county. I would love for you to expand on your knowledge of "strait thug life" and "hossin'".
kevind said
at 1:18 pm on May 3, 2011
i like how you use diffrent words that people really dont use much nice work
lizf said
at 1:22 pm on May 3, 2011
Good job fighting for you town.?
samil said
at 1:22 pm on May 3, 2011
I liked how you described the "straight thug life"
heathert said
at 1:23 pm on May 3, 2011
I like how u leave out what place you are talking about, but we all know you are talking about Castalia(Even if it's not a truthful story) lol.
wyattg said
at 1:23 pm on May 3, 2011
I like how you kept all your words the same saying it like a Gangsta would good job
matti said
at 1:24 pm on May 3, 2011
I feel like I entered the atmosphere of the place you are describing by reading the slang terms that are apparently used there.
feliciag said
at 1:27 pm on May 3, 2011
I liked how you were fighting for your town and how you described everything. Good job
mariahm said
at 1:28 pm on May 3, 2011
Good job explaining the "straight thug life."
brandens said
at 1:15 pm on May 5, 2011
I like how you explained the "Straight Thug Life" and how you fought your homies...
isabellas said
at 1:22 pm on May 5, 2011
Good job on the job description of a 'gangster'.
austina said
at 1:34 pm on May 5, 2011
I think the place you are trying to explain as "smelly" is actually the town where God was born... Now called heaven. Good story about the dirty hole you live in though! :)
kandisg said
at 1:48 pm on May 5, 2011
Good job describing and using unique phrases.
alexo said
at 2:03 pm on May 5, 2011
you can't claim to be a redneck and still be thug life. not cool atall lol you either have to be a B.A. redneck or a gangster. can't be both.
maxm said
at 2:05 pm on May 5, 2011
Great story about Volga City, Iowa. Everyone knows that it's the most "straight up thug life" city in Iowa, AMERICA, and the entire world.
leahg said
at 2:10 pm on May 5, 2011
ahhh i don't think this fight will ever die!:P good job describing each town as you see it!
morgant said
at 2:16 pm on May 5, 2011
HAHA. interesting story, nice job. you had some unique phrases.
jamest said
at 8:24 am on May 6, 2011
Sounds like some town trying to live up to Wadena.
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