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Bryce S

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Batman

 

         As Batman ran across the rooftops he had only one thing on his mind save Robin I have to he thought I’m his last hope he grappled up the side of wane enterprises on to a gargoyle and watched he used his high tech bat mask to pick up the frequency of Robin’s voice he spotted were it was coming from and glided towards it. Bam! The Joker had shot at robin but batman hade dove in front of him and blocked it with his bulletproof cape. The Joker laughed into the knight as Batman threw a bat a rang at him and knocked him out cold. Batman carried Joker to his bat mobile and threw him in. Batman sped across town to Arkham black gate prison dropped Joker off there and went back to the crime scene to get Robin but he was already gone.

 

 I don’t understand Batman said as he used his bat suet to scan the scene for clues he noticed a piece of black clothe. He stored it away in his utility belt and headed back to the bat cave to analyze it. When he arrived Alfred had bean tied up and gagged and the bat cave was trashed. Batman untied Alfred and asked him what happened here. Alfred said it was Bain.

 

Batman quickly rushed to the bat mobile and sped down town to an old laboratory he picked the lock on the door and walked in immediately he knew something was wrong Robin was just sitting in the dark tied up all alone immediately the lights went out and crack! Bam! Zap! Batman fell to the floor when the lights turned back on. He saw a big bulky man. Bain, Batman said he immediately jumped up and roundhouse kicked him in the face Bain stumbled backwards. Batman shot his grapple gun and it looped around his feet and pulled it as Bain fell to the floor Batman immediately ripped of his mask and cut all the tubes leading into the back of his head Bain shrunk back into his original size and lay there moaning.

 

Batman tied him up and notified the authorities. He took Robin back to the bat cave where they unsuited and headed up stairs to Wane Manner and enjoyed an evening of relaxing then the mansion started on fire one he and robin hade gotten out they started analyzing the flames and determent the fire started from a toxic gas that was released in the basement. They looked into the toxic gas and they found it was first used in a synthetic perfume but because of it’s toxin’s they stopped producing it. The owner of the company was a man named falcony.  Batman had remembered that he bought the building of the company. To use as a training facility for robin when he first started training him.

 

 

They had not bean there for years. When batman and robin arrived they found the building remade into the factory and their at the end of the conveyer belt stood falcony with an ak47 he started shooting at batman and robin but they used there super cool ninja moves to evade the fire. Once they reached him batman bunched him only to find out he was a robot. Batman used his scanners and looked around and he notices there was only one button in the entire factory.

 

 

 Then robin was like there’s a button it’s press it batman said that’s not a good idea. But it was to late robin had already pressed the button and then a hatch opened and there stood the real falconey he had a giant laser gun and he looked pretty awesome. When he started firing he missed the first two times then he grazed bat mans head then they were doing hard core parkour all the way up. Then batman grappled to the hatch and started beating up falcony.

 

But batman got pepper sprayed  and he fell off onto gargoyle then he started throwing the batter rang like crazy until he hit falconey on to the ground he cuffed falcony and as soon as he did he started hearing some beeping and noticed the factory was a bomb and it was ten seconds from going off so batman hotwired it and saved Gotham the end.

 

 

 

Comments (19)

Joshua said

at 9:29 am on Apr 1, 2014

This is the best batman story ever! My favorite part was when batman almost died in the end but he didn't and defeated the real falconey!

Casey P said

at 12:20 pm on Apr 1, 2014

This story is the best story ever and I loved how Batman is so awesome and Hardcore parkour was the best thing because it adds a whole new level of fighting skill to the scene. Love it.

Anna T said

at 12:35 pm on Apr 1, 2014

I like how you describe the actions, and the characters.

Allison L. said

at 12:43 pm on Apr 1, 2014

I liked the "comic" words you used.

Brandon B said

at 12:46 pm on Apr 1, 2014

Awesome story, I liked how you described the actions.

Megan B said

at 12:46 pm on Apr 1, 2014

I liked how it was really dramatic through the whole story.

Zach F said

at 12:49 pm on Apr 1, 2014

Like a comic book with the word Crash, Bam,Zap

Dillon L said

at 11:47 am on Apr 2, 2014

i like how the story moved around it just didn't focus on one villain and batman is awesome.

Kassi S. said

at 11:57 am on Apr 2, 2014

I liked the dramatic events.

PiperS said

at 8:55 am on Apr 3, 2014

It was really dramatic and I enjoyed how Batman seemed defeated but eventually prevailed.

Macy H said

at 12:14 pm on Apr 3, 2014

I really like how you used the words crack, bam, and zap to describe the characters.

NathanC said

at 12:17 pm on Apr 3, 2014

I liked how you used some of your words they were really good and you had great details.

Hailey S said

at 12:30 pm on Apr 3, 2014

I really liked how dramatic it was and all the details it used!

Claire H. said

at 12:31 pm on Apr 3, 2014

I liked the words for sound effects.

Kariann E said

at 12:31 pm on Apr 3, 2014

I like how you grabbed my attention right away and you mad it very dramatic.

Taylor O said

at 12:32 pm on Apr 3, 2014

I liked how you used Batman In your story and its full of action I like it.

Joe B. said

at 12:39 pm on Apr 3, 2014

I liked how you described what he did and told about how he executed his assignments.

Jenna B. said

at 12:47 pm on Apr 3, 2014

I liked the action.

Jaylee H. said

at 12:47 pm on Apr 3, 2014

Great details! It was a really good story!

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